Comments on: Fiction: Joe’s Bar (Part 2 of 5)

By: 1,000 Word Story in Five Parts, Part III | Vers Les Etoiles

1,000 Word Story in Five Parts, Part III | Vers Les Etoiles — Tue, 10 Dec 2013 16:01:49 +0000

[…] Chuck Wendig’s 1,000 word story in five parts, I continued Urban Spaceman‘s and Infinite Skies‘ tale about Joe’s Bar and the man who broke the world. Check out the challenge […]

By: Rebecca Douglass

Rebecca Douglass — Mon, 09 Dec 2013 15:22:20 +0000

Well, the thing with this game is, if you have an idea you’d better use it, because you don’t get to put it i later! It’s a little weird–I had the whole story more or less in my mind when I started my opening story, but I don’t think anyone is going there!

By: Paul Baughman

Paul Baughman — Mon, 09 Dec 2013 13:41:34 +0000

Thanks both. I’m wondering, though, if I hadn’t made a mistake. Would it have been better to leave the sight of the Shattered Earth as the climax of the story? i.e. the end of part 5.

By: Rebecca Douglass

Rebecca Douglass — Fri, 06 Dec 2013 22:47:05 +0000

Nice continuation! I wonder how many versions of this story we can get produced.

By: Mr Urban Spaceman

Mr Urban Spaceman — Fri, 06 Dec 2013 13:43:48 +0000

Loved it! I was wondering if somebody would take this to a different time or place than our own present day, and your continuation didn’t disappoint. Poor Earth. Nicely told!