Comments on: Fiction: Stewart (part 5 of 5) http://pbaughman.com/blog/2013/12/20/fiction-stewart-part-5-of-5/ Infinite stories, infinite worlds, infinite skies Thu, 30 Apr 2015 11:13:09 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=4.2.38 By: Rebecca Douglass http://pbaughman.com/blog/2013/12/20/fiction-stewart-part-5-of-5/comment-page-1/#comment-120 Tue, 24 Dec 2013 23:23:56 +0000 http://pbaughman.com/blog/?p=358#comment-120 Wow. This didn’t go along with the version I added, but it’s a great story as it turned out!

]]> By: Meagan Wilson http://pbaughman.com/blog/2013/12/20/fiction-stewart-part-5-of-5/comment-page-1/#comment-118 Tue, 24 Dec 2013 20:30:57 +0000 http://pbaughman.com/blog/?p=358#comment-118 I laughed out loud. It’s great! And similar to the tack I was thinking of taking, if no one else did. Something about the mom being an old flame, anyway. Well done. :-)

]]> By: Smoph http://pbaughman.com/blog/2013/12/20/fiction-stewart-part-5-of-5/comment-page-1/#comment-117 Mon, 23 Dec 2013 20:50:25 +0000 http://pbaughman.com/blog/?p=358#comment-117 Great ending Paul! I like what you did with it!

]]> By: Paul Baughman http://pbaughman.com/blog/2013/12/20/fiction-stewart-part-5-of-5/comment-page-1/#comment-116 Sat, 21 Dec 2013 14:32:28 +0000 http://pbaughman.com/blog/?p=358#comment-116 Well, shucks! Thanks. It’s easy to disguise an ending when five different people do the writing.

Originally I just thought Jamie’s mother would kick Stewart’s ass, because, you know, the female of the species is more dangerous, especially when protecting her young. Then this ending popped out of the ole subconscious and I ran with it.

]]> By: aaronbrowder http://pbaughman.com/blog/2013/12/20/fiction-stewart-part-5-of-5/comment-page-1/#comment-115 Fri, 20 Dec 2013 21:28:21 +0000 http://pbaughman.com/blog/?p=358#comment-115 Excellent ending! I never saw it coming. :)

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